https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0SVvIyhTXk
In this pitch I received positive feedback from my last one. People told me it was basically all set in stone and that all I needed to do was be more fluent with my words. In this last one I practiced my speech a little better and was able to do it without stuttering and able to get my message across much more clear. As a very extroverted person I am always comfortable being in front of the camera and being able to speaking my mind with what I have to say,
Hello Joel, I thought your pitch was very intriguing and exiting. You demonstrated professional public speaking skills and didn't seem to get stuck or stranded. You spoke fluently about your business Idea and were dressed appropriately. Last week was my first elevator pitch and I was unable to speak as clearly as you. I think your post could use a little more detail on your actual and how your able to beat all the other life insurance policies, but overall great pitch!
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